Director: Georgina Ladley
Camera - Andrea Nicholls, Georgina Ladley, Danica Ebers
Actors - Georgina Ladley, Andrea Nicholls, Danica Ebers
Editing - Danica Ebers
Sub- Editing - Georgina Ladley&Andrea Nicholls
Foley - Andrea & Danica
Effects - Georgina
Andrea, Georgina, Danica
ReplyDeleteAs the video has not been uploaded by the rough cut deadline for assessment I am unable to give you directed feedback or a grade beyond L1 for the video as it is incomplete.
However micro aspects you have done well:
Some well framed shots and a variety of angles (L4)
Steady and smooth movements (L4)
Some attention to detail Car & props, location/costume, but costume and 2 actors same role lets it down (trainers, joggers) (L3)
Some careful cutting, story flows well (L4)
Narrative makes some sense (L3)
Confident performance
Clearly identifies the genre (L3)
Improvements
Title sequence missing (L1) - reshoot?
No soundtrack or foley (L1)
Make the attack black and white to show memory and hide the pink shoes/trousers (L2)
Colour correction is a subtle art - don't make skin too green, try using blue and match the bathroom colour temp
Balance the lighting levels
Hit the final deadline (Fri 2nd March 5pm)